That "Connecting. Please wait..." message had me crying in both pain & laughter. Some of the expressions were pretty funny. I think if this was a 3 minute video rather than 6, the pacing would've been better...but, I can see why you were on the fence with releasing this. There was a lot to be said in this video, yet this may have been communicated better if done in a couple of smaller volumes. Either way, good stuff! Hilarious ending! :)
This was great! I'm SO sorry that happened all because of a stupid GoPro (no idea that was not allowed, why?). In any case, super glad you turned that negative into a really funny positive! :) Cheers!
I definitely appreciate the details done here. This was a charming animation which has some good potential for something a little more down the road. Nice one! :)
"I should've switched to waterrrrr!"
Ok, this was better than I expected it to be. Of particular notes...
-Very good animations
-Very solid flow & rhythm that really complimented the very amusing story told in the lyrics
-LOVED the brief & very cool carnival-style breakdown in track
-Very cool to see the female character become as awkward as the main character later in the video; A good message of "being weird & indecent is ok"...mostly. lol
-The lyrics, overall, had a very fun vibe until the expletives started taking over. It wasn't overdone, but it was still enough for even my sailor mouth to notice. Cussin' is awesome. Period. But, there's still a time & place especially when the rest of the lyrics & story was trying to advertise this really, really odd character who has a very odd mix of characteristics AND the execution of the story was done better than expected.
Keep it up! You may be onto something here with being so indecent. :)
Founder & CEO
Nascent Games, LLC
Thanks man! Yeah it's pretty expletive-heavy but I don't think I went too overboard :)
Feel free to follow me on Youtube and Facebook since the next couple won't be animated and therefore not suitable for NG, that's if you're interested in following still!
Thanks for the comment!
Double entendres, be damned! Cracked me up! Nice work! :)
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